My Writing Goals for 2009-2010 are...
- Try to balance text evidence, quotes, opinion, and voice
- Don't be to casual or to serious when I write anything
- Try not to use so many [...] in my writing
- Use more syntactic devices in writing
- Have stronger paragraphs
- Have a bigger vocabulary
- Use more quotes
These are really admirable goals. "Too" means extent, or amount, as in too much pizza, or too little money. "To" is a preposition, as in let's go to the store.
ReplyDeleteThose are some good goals. I like how you wrote them in an upside down pyramid, it looks awesome!
ReplyDeleteOh, and nice monkey. [:
Well, thank you very much!
ReplyDeleteIt kind of just turned out that ways as I was writing them.
O and Mr. Johnson I do not understand what you are saying????
Maybe try narrowing down you writing goals because there is a lot on your plate right now!
ReplyDeleteThose are really nice goals. You might want to narrow down your goals so you don't have to worry about a lot of them.
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