All by my self…
With no one around me
I listen to the peaceful sounds
The birds crowing
The trees moving
And the water moving
Down the river…
I see a reflection of me
Then I see a stuffed bunny
Floating down the river
Maybe a little girls' or boys'
Dropped in and never able to see it again
Maybe it was special
I think of something special
My blanket
I don't know how it would feel
To loose something so special
I would be devastated
They must have been devastated
Loosing something you will never see again...
This is pretty good. It has a original topic that most would't think of and that makes it more interesting. If you were to change something however you might want to keep it one color because the two colors take away from the flow of the poem.
ReplyDeleteIt was good and interesting. your voice was cool, kind of mysterious and soothing and i dont really know how to explain it, but it was awesome
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